Mike Maddox
Superstars
The Ladies just Keep on Rollin In
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Post by Mike Maddox on Mar 17, 2013 15:26:03 GMT -5
Any Feedback on my maddox rps would be greatly appreciated
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Post by Daniel Ballentine on Mar 17, 2013 17:46:32 GMT -5
First and foremost, awesome work. Very good at what you do. You know I love your work and I think you are better then you show. It scares me if you put 100 percent in your promos in PW. I know life is kicking you right now but deep town you fight hard until the end.
My only bad thing I have to say is.. Break up the long sentences. 6 or 7 lines is good...
Other then that, it is solid.. it will be sad to see you leave in a few months, we def. need to face off before you leave.
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